oh dear, the teacher really creeps me out!
Hmm interesting so far, looking forward to more :)
I love this story so far! The plot is interesting and well paced. I can't wait to find out what happens next. :)
uh oh, i hate to think about what's in store for harry. still, good chapter!
| Title: Snips and Snails and Puppy Dogs' Tails
| 20 Jan 2012 3:28 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Oh Snape, you can be so evil!
Poor Harry. I wonder who that man was.
I'm intrigued.
Great chappie.
Oh dear. Not a good start to the year for Harry. Poor kid.
I hope that eventually Snape sees the real Harry.
Great job with the chapter. Can't wait to see where you go with the story.
This is really quite an interesting story. It's a little slow at points - especially when you're copying straight from the book. This most recent chapter had a lot of that, and while it's no doubt needed for the storyline it does irk me slightly - probably just because I've read it already XD
I would suggest skipping over those parts? Kinda like you did with the death-day party unless you are changing up the scene. *shrug*
I really like your writing style! And how you go into Snape's head on occasion. I do love his vindictiveness and Harry's reactions to him.
Okay. I have a seriously bad feeling about Jenkins. And then I read the "warnings" again and cringed. Is he luring Harry into a false sense of security? I hope not, I actually kinda liked the guy - except for the alarms going off in my head. If this is going where I think it is... I always imagined Lockhart as the more... dangerous type.
Author's Response: Lockhart does strike one as the more dangerous type. Which in a way makes him not dangerous at all... The most dangerous ones are the ones you don't suspect. Hope that makes sense. And this is the only chapter that has that much taken straight from the book. It just wasn't working no matter how else I tried to write it, and I needed Jenkins to intervene on Harry's behalf, not McGonagall.
This is very interesting, sad too, though. I hope you'll update soon!
| Title: Snips and Snails and Puppy Dogs' Tails
| 27 Jul 2011 6:05 am
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Please tell me that things get better for Harry?
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