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Title: Promise That You've Broken 01 Jan 2024 3:50 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m re-reading this story again because it’s an all-time fave. And wow. This is an amazingly angsty chapter. The rain, the mud, I love it all.
Title: Promise That You've Broken 05 Apr 2021 8:34 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Absolutely amazing chapter
Title: Promise That You've Broken 28 Sep 2015 4:19 am
Reviewer: lastcrazyhorn (Signed) [Report This]
    Fine. Make me bawl. See if I care.
Title: Promise That You've Broken 18 Aug 2014 2:48 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Snape came through for Harry. It sounds like Harry is going to need him. He seems to have been injured more severely than he thinks.
Title: Promise That You've Broken 21 May 2013 7:52 am
Reviewer: rusulka7 (Signed) [Report This]
    you've done the angst well! Poor poor harry, his sense of abandonment has reached a high. Snape better get his act together, the big clueless meany! :>)
Title: Promise That You've Broken 09 Sep 2012 1:28 am
Reviewer: PamPam (Signed) [Report This]
    mmm I was hoping it was just a dream of delirium but maybe I was wrong .. I read the next to better understand what really happened. compliments. beautiful chapter. Pam
Title: Promise That You've Broken 20 Aug 2012 1:01 am
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Yep...still crying.
Title: Promise That You've Broken 18 Aug 2011 12:36 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    A bit soppy but lovely chapter
Title: Promise That You've Broken 25 Jul 2011 6:47 am
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    this was amazing!!!!!!! awesome job really trully
    ""With a long pause, and a long look at the young man before him, Severus said with resolve, "You won't. I promise you that."

    With those words Harry was unable to hold together any longer, and broke down into a shivering, sobbing, soaking mess, allowing himself to be embraced by the only one who had pursued him relentlessly, and claimed that it was not from spite. The words were a lullaby Harry had waited to hear his entire life, and when Severus looked down a moment later as the shivering boy fell still, he realized Harry was unconscious, and apparated them away into the night.|"

    I htink the end really spoke of the desire from both of them keep up the amazing work
Title: Promise That You've Broken 24 Jul 2011 2:44 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Finally!!!!

    I hope that Snape keeps his promise this time. Poor Harry. I hope that he's going to be alright.
    Good chappie

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