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Reviews For Everything To Lose
What a lovely story. Actually it's rather poignant. I know about unhappy childhoods so I find myself getting quite choked up as I read along. That's my excuse for not leaving reviews I guess. But you're doing lovely writing. Characterization is wonderful, real and sensitive. Your writing is the best kind - I don't even notice it. I don't see words, I see a STORY. Hope this suffices for now. Author's Response: These are the types of wonderful reviews that keep me going. I think I've got the bulk of the best reviews I've ever gotten for this story. That makes me happy to know my writing is getting better.
Have you read any of my other stories? You may like them as well.
I love Luna. She is so sweet. Great chappie. Onto the next.
Author's Response: Hopefully this story will be done soon (in the next few days) and then I can move on to my other stories once again. Thanks for the review. I like it when I can create moving chapters full of emotion rather than flat characters. |
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