This theme of feeling alone in the midst of families (whose members feel a sense of belong) is striking. Shivers me down to my bones.
I would have thought Albus would talk to Severus before he took Harry. Or at least asked Harry. I guess Albus is making assumptions, too.
I hope that Severus goes to resume soon. nice chapter. Pam
Harry must be so sick of people moving him around like a chess piece. He needs to be back with his family, and soon.
And I still don't like Slughorn ;)
How am I supposed to read if my tears aren't stopping? Clearly that's the problem.
| Title: Affection
| 18 Aug 2011 1:16 am
|
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Liked this as it chimed with my own opinion of Dumbledore
Aw man. Poor Harry. Once again, his wishes aren't taken into account and he's just told where to go and what to do.
Ron is really in for a surprise if he keeps making comments about Snape like that.
awesome job poor Harry the weasleys are not what he needs right now
| Title: Affection
| 25 Jul 2011 4:37 am
|
| Reviewer: b.nolea (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
You have a very powerful writing style, please keep the chapters coming.
Oh dear. I thought that I'd reviewed this chapter, but somehow I didn't. Well, I have to rectify that since it was such a good one. Although...my heart is breaking for Harry.
I really wish that Snape would go and bring Harry back, and fight for him.
Good job, I can't wait till the next chapter.
|