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Title: Affection 24 Jul 2011 9:33 pm
Reviewer: Rhea (Signed) [Report This]
    Great!
Title: Affection 24 Jul 2011 6:37 am
Reviewer: Firefly_inc (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like this story. Its so angtsy. It made me cry in some parts. I really want harry to get his own family. I think Snape and Luna are the perfect fit for Harry. Ihope to read more soon.
Title: Affection 24 Jul 2011 4:59 am
Reviewer: CheyRain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is really good and i hope you update soon!
Title: Affection 24 Jul 2011 2:19 am
Reviewer: SnapeSnitchGirl33 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Amazing, amazing, wonderful, brilliant...I'm running out of adjectives to describe the sheer genius of this story. Please update soon!
Title: Affection 24 Jul 2011 1:58 am
Reviewer: Rye (Signed) [Report This]
    Please continue!!!
Title: Affection 24 Jul 2011 12:41 am
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like this story! It's a bit ooc in places, but I'm still really liking it.
Title: Affection 23 Jul 2011 11:41 pm
Reviewer: twilight1987 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story so far! Can't wait to see what happens! Especially since you are updating the story so quickly!
Title: Affection 23 Jul 2011 7:41 pm
Reviewer: Tsukinoko (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi! I hope Harry can go back to Snape's house! I think you have 2 more small issues. First, I don't believe J.K. Rowling even mentions Harry liking Ginny until book 6 and they certainly don't date until well into the book (the end, basically). Also, the part where Harry asked Slughorn if his parents knew each other doesn't make sense because Slughorn was just talking about Snape and Lily so it sounds like Harry thinks Snape is his father or something. Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    It's fan fiction so things change, like Harry and Ginny dating earlier.  I'll go back and look at the sceond part though.

     

    Thanks for the review.

Title: Affection 23 Jul 2011 6:20 pm
Reviewer: Mozalini (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, loving this so far. You write Luna especially well and I love fics where she plays a bigger part. Looking forward to reading more. :)
Title: Affection 23 Jul 2011 11:52 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh I love this and I look forward to the following chapters! thank you...

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