| Title: When Everything's Made To Be Broken
| 01 Jan 2024 4:27 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I appreciate the foreshadowing in this story that primes us for the angst to come. I also love how clearly we can see Harry’s situation and Severus’s thinking.
| Title: When Everything's Made To Be Broken
| 10 Sep 2012 1:03 am
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| Reviewer: PamPam (Signed)
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I state that I can not stand Ron. Harry needs help and Ron does not understand ... grrr. Harry and Severus are "gathered" finally! nice chapter. compliments. Pam
Your emotionally distraught Harry is just so beautifully done.
*sniffles loudly* Making my shirt all wet. Maybe you should pay for my laundry bill.
Oh please update soon! I am so glad that Harry finally made his way all the way down, or maybe up to Severus, he needs him and I hope that he will finally open up and get the help he so desperately needs!
Author's Response: You're wish is granted. I'm updating right now! Lol.
| Title: When Everything's Made To Be Broken
| 09 Aug 2011 8:02 am
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| Reviewer: min (Anonymous)
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| Title: When Everything's Made To Be Broken
| 09 Aug 2011 4:51 am
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| Reviewer: Testa204 (Signed)
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Great story - look forward to finding out what happens next! I like how the emotions are portrayed and the way the chapter ends - very well written. :)
| Title: When Everything's Made To Be Broken
| 09 Aug 2011 2:47 am
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| Reviewer: Caesara (Signed)
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AHH I love it!
I feel bad that Harry is so upset and even getting depressed, but I have no doubt that Snape will make him better now! :)
You're awesome! Keep up the good work!
| Title: When Everything's Made To Be Broken
| 09 Aug 2011 12:56 am
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| Reviewer: Rosa_Sweet (Signed)
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Fantastic story! Fantastic updates!
Your writing leaps off the page :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy to hear it!
| Title: When Everything's Made To Be Broken
| 09 Aug 2011 12:53 am
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| Reviewer: gin (Anonymous)
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i love your story.poor harry.im still angry with snape.i think he much attention luna then harry.
and luna.she is a little thoughtless.
i hope snape talk and understand to harry.and I hope that harry becomes more family to severus soon.
please update soon.
Author's Response: I'm sorry that you see Luna as thoughtless, because I see her as being very thoughtful in this story. I'm glad that you like the story though.
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