What did I like? All of it! ;D
I really enjoyed the originality you put into this Snape-adopts-Harry kind of story. The situation was unique, as usually this sort of thing involves a daring rescue from the Dursleys or the Dursleys getting their comeuppance. This was a refreshing new angle :).
Luna being a part of it certainly spiced things up too! Lol. She’s an awesome character, and becoming Severus’s daughter sure brought some sunshine into his life. It was terrible for her to have lost her father, but I think it’s safe to say she’s happy with her new dad and brother :). Harry’s relationships with Severus and Luna were really well-written and I enjoyed the interaction! I also liked that Harry’s friends came through and helped him have fun again. I was worried for a bit, what with the fight and all, but you had them stay true to their character!
Great fic! And Luna and Neville getting together was a nice bonus ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked the story. Have you read any of my other stories? Mine don't typically follow the 'rescue from' or 'revenge on' the Dursley's scenario.
Thanks again!