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Reviews For Everything To Lose
Title: Everything To Lose/This Is Home 13 Aug 2011 4:42 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it. Awesome story, thanks for sharing. Will you be updating Dream Walker and a Fair Advantage as well soon? Either way, looking forward to more of your work.

    Author's Response: I haven't thought about those in a while.  I will try to finish My Secret Father first and then get back to thoes.  Thanks for your review!
Title: Hope 13 Aug 2011 6:42 am
Reviewer: Librasmile (Signed) [Report This]
    Just saw your note about reviews. You may be over your discouragement by now but I thought I would leave one anyway.

    What a lovely story. Actually it's rather poignant. I know about unhappy childhoods so I find myself getting quite choked up as I read along. That's my excuse for not leaving reviews I guess.

    But you're doing lovely writing. Characterization is wonderful, real and sensitive. Your writing is the best kind - I don't even notice it. I don't see words, I see a STORY.

    Hope this suffices for now.

    Author's Response:

    These are the types of wonderful reviews that keep me going.  I think I've got the bulk of the best reviews I've ever gotten for this story.  That makes me happy to know my writing is getting better.

     

    Have you read any of my other stories?  You may like them as well.

Title: Faith In Nothing 13 Aug 2011 3:28 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    That last 4 paragraphes made me smile bigger than the Cheshire Cat. Thanks for that!
Title: Faith In Nothing 13 Aug 2011 1:36 am
Reviewer: Testa204 (Signed) [Report This]
    What a great chapter - laughter and angst, all in one!

    If the story must end, I'm hoping for a happy one! :)

    I love the way you capture Luna's personality in this story.
Title: Faith In Nothing 13 Aug 2011 1:02 am
Reviewer: Yondi (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this one (like I always do love your chapters) - because of you I've started to appreciate angsty parts.

    I don't know if you know what I mean when I say, that I like the feeling those angsty twists bring to me - there's this sucking feeling in my stomach that makes me feel miserable for the Character (in this case obviously Harry) but in a nice kind of way.
    (I'm sick - aren't I?)

    I hope you keep on writing this fanfiction and I really hope for angsty stuff as you are one of those authors that make me feel that strong about the characters.

    That's what I liked about "My Secret father" too, although I kind of got irritated by Harry taking the dark mark and stuff but well... this is a review for THIS ff and not your other great work :D

    I all in all like your stories because Snape is just a really BIG git at the begining but in the end they start to get along (although I would wish that the angsty/hateful atmosphere would last longer - but well, maybe I'm just too much into drama)

    If you want to end this story I (for my part) would really like to see a little bit angst and then a happy ending containing Luna, Harry and Severus - the new family.
    Although I could quite think of the story going on because I doubt that Harry's strong struggles in finding his place in the family would be ereased just because of the official adoption.

    No matter what you decide, I want to thank you for your stories and your really fast uptades and I hope you'll write some more of your great (and nicely angsty) fanfictions (:

    Author's Response:

     I know exactly the feelng you're talking about.  I'm addicted to nicely written angsty stores as well.

     

    Thanks for the nice long review!

Title: Faith In Nothing 12 Aug 2011 10:32 pm
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Good job showing that this is something Severus has thought through so well. It is a big decision after all.

    Loved the scene at the lake too.

    Poor Severus having to have "The Talk" with Harry and being reticent to do so. I can't help but wonder if he'll need to do the same for Luna and Neville too. Especially Neville, considering how terrified the poor boy is of Snape! LOL
Title: Faith In Nothing 12 Aug 2011 9:20 pm
Reviewer: twilight1987 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw I don't want this story to end! I love it!
Title: Faith In Nothing 12 Aug 2011 7:28 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Update soon. :D
Title: If I Can Leave Behind These Memories 12 Aug 2011 5:18 pm
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    I just want to say this story is awesome. I like all your work, I just think this one is very well organized and realistic. :D
Title: If I Can Leave Behind These Memories 12 Aug 2011 5:13 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Update soon please, can't wait to see what happens next.

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