| Title: When Everything's Made To Be Broken
| 09 Aug 2011 12:53 am
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| Reviewer: gin (Anonymous)
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i love your story.poor harry.im still angry with snape.i think he much attention luna then harry.
and luna.she is a little thoughtless.
i hope snape talk and understand to harry.and I hope that harry becomes more family to severus soon.
please update soon.
Author's Response: I'm sorry that you see Luna as thoughtless, because I see her as being very thoughtful in this story. I'm glad that you like the story though.
| Title: When Everything's Made To Be Broken
| 09 Aug 2011 12:46 am
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| Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed)
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Oh, poor Harry! I just want to hug him! I hope Ron and Hermione will come to their senses. Please update again soon!!!
| Title: When Everything's Made To Be Broken
| 08 Aug 2011 10:34 pm
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| Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed)
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home sick today and found this story. really love it. looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Sorry that you're sick! Glad you're liking it so far!
| Title: When Everything's Made To Be Broken
| 08 Aug 2011 7:26 pm
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| Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed)
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Wow. What an intense chapter. I'm glad that Harry finally made it to Snape's room but sorry that it took so long for him to do so.
| Title: When Everything's Made To Be Broken
| 08 Aug 2011 6:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed)
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awwww poor Harry i can't wait to see the next chapter and know what is wrong
please update soon im looking 4ward to the nxt chapter!
| Title: When Everything's Made To Be Broken
| 08 Aug 2011 3:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
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I didn't have much time for reading lately, so I read this all in one go just now. Great story so far; I like how you capture teenage Harry's mood swings and tendency to dramatize: everything's a life-changing event, and people are either for or against him. Given Harry's difficult situation, it's no wonder that he's going through all that angst.
I like that you had Snape treat him harshly at first, because it's realistic; especially after the Pensieve incident, Snape would not be able to shed his prejudices against the "Potter brat" just because he saw him eating from the garbage. That was very nicely done, as was Snape's eventual change of mind.
I also very much like your Luna, and hope that she'll continue to play a part in the story.
Thank you very much for writing, I'm looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks much! No worries, because Luna will continue to play a part, although probably not as big of a one now that they are back at Hogwarts.
Love it. Update soon, I'm anxious to see what happens next.
| Title: When Everything's Made To Be Broken
| 08 Aug 2011 2:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
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This was a great chapter, poor Harry and I guess poor Snape as well as he has no idea how badly Harry needs him.
ooh just found this last night and thought i'd give it a read, I love the concept even though Snape needed a slap in the earlier chapters! I just want Harry to go down and eventually a nice hug lol :)
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