Another great chapter. I hope that Harry becomes more family to Severus soon... Dumbledore was selfish to simply whisk him away as he did without even asking.... And Severus already is starting to see him as family it seems... Ahh. Can't wait until the next chapter(s). =)
I love it ;)
But I hope that it will be Snape who will seek Harry, because for now its only Harry who take an action. I hope that he feel a little depressed and Snape will see it... and you know ;D
Oh, how heartbreaking. Seeing how attentive Snape is with Luna and still being on the outside looking in.
| Title: Stabbing In The Dark
| 25 Jul 2011 8:02 pm
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| Reviewer: LJ (Anonymous)
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I love this. Love, love, love, love, love!!!!!
Author's Response: Lol, thanks!
awesome job poor Harry the weasleys are not what he needs right now
| Title: Promise That You've Broken
| 25 Jul 2011 6:47 am
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| Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed)
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this was amazing!!!!!!! awesome job really trully
""With a long pause, and a long look at the young man before him, Severus said with resolve, "You won't. I promise you that."
With those words Harry was unable to hold together any longer, and broke down into a shivering, sobbing, soaking mess, allowing himself to be embraced by the only one who had pursued him relentlessly, and claimed that it was not from spite. The words were a lullaby Harry had waited to hear his entire life, and when Severus looked down a moment later as the shivering boy fell still, he realized Harry was unconscious, and apparated them away into the night.|"
I htink the end really spoke of the desire from both of them keep up the amazing work
| Title: Affection
| 25 Jul 2011 4:37 am
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| Reviewer: b.nolea (Anonymous)
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You have a very powerful writing style, please keep the chapters coming.
Oh dear. I thought that I'd reviewed this chapter, but somehow I didn't. Well, I have to rectify that since it was such a good one. Although...my heart is breaking for Harry.
I really wish that Snape would go and bring Harry back, and fight for him.
Good job, I can't wait till the next chapter.
| Title: Affection
| 24 Jul 2011 6:37 am
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| Reviewer: Firefly_inc (Anonymous)
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I really like this story. Its so angtsy. It made me cry in some parts. I really want harry to get his own family. I think Snape and Luna are the perfect fit for Harry. Ihope to read more soon.
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