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Title: In The Most Unlikely Of Places 24 Jul 2011 1:56 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, just found this story, and I love it already. I really love Luna. I'm so anxious to see where you take this story.
Title: Affection 24 Jul 2011 12:41 am
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like this story! It's a bit ooc in places, but I'm still really liking it.
Title: Affection 23 Jul 2011 11:41 pm
Reviewer: twilight1987 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story so far! Can't wait to see what happens! Especially since you are updating the story so quickly!
Title: Affection 23 Jul 2011 7:41 pm
Reviewer: Tsukinoko (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi! I hope Harry can go back to Snape's house! I think you have 2 more small issues. First, I don't believe J.K. Rowling even mentions Harry liking Ginny until book 6 and they certainly don't date until well into the book (the end, basically). Also, the part where Harry asked Slughorn if his parents knew each other doesn't make sense because Slughorn was just talking about Snape and Lily so it sounds like Harry thinks Snape is his father or something. Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    It's fan fiction so things change, like Harry and Ginny dating earlier.  I'll go back and look at the sceond part though.

     

    Thanks for the review.

Title: Affection 23 Jul 2011 6:20 pm
Reviewer: Mozalini (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, loving this so far. You write Luna especially well and I love fics where she plays a bigger part. Looking forward to reading more. :)
Title: Affection 23 Jul 2011 11:52 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh I love this and I look forward to the following chapters! thank you...
Title: Affection 23 Jul 2011 11:21 am
Reviewer: kkj (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry, he was just beginning to feel comfortable, and possibly wanted with Luna and Snape, and then, in pops Dumbledore, carting him off like he's chattel. Very entertaining, emotional story.
Title: Affection 23 Jul 2011 7:19 am
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice story. interesting to see where it goes.
Title: Affection 23 Jul 2011 5:15 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh my gosh, I love you! Are you going to put up the whole story in one day???

    XD

    Author's Response: Nearly, lol.  I think I'm done for the day.  There are about 5 chapters left for me to write and they will be done hopefully in the next two weeks.
Title: Affection 23 Jul 2011 4:26 am
Reviewer: Caesara (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope he gets back with Snape and they can be a happy family :))
    This is super good ! And I'm glad you updated so soon! I hope Harry can really open up to Snape eventually! :P

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