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Title: The Return 24 Jun 2015 1:05 am
Reviewer: Pug Mom 10 (Signed) [Report This]
    interesting plot and the pairing!!
Title: The Return 05 Mar 2013 8:47 pm
Reviewer: PotterObsessed (Signed) [Report This]
    I love when Harry turns to Sirius and asks him if there was any objection from him, and Sirius was real hurried to tell him otherwise, lol
Title: The Return 29 Jun 2012 10:30 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy. of all the people to return from the grave...ugh. I feel sorry for Harry and Ginny already!
Title: The Return 17 Feb 2012 10:58 pm
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    Loves Sirius....I'm good lol
Title: The Return 06 Feb 2012 9:22 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, now the fireworks start. I don't envy Harry trying to keep the peace between THOSE two. They're like Texans and Comanches.

    One thing did surprise me was that Harry's immediate response to Severus' stubbornness was a smack. Given his own childhood, I would think he'd be more likely to reason first, because even though Severus is five physically, he's also an adult in his head and let's not forget, he WAS Harry's professor for all of his life, so you can't expect him to just 'obey' Harry because he says so. That's not realistic.

    Plus, I doubt if force ever worked well with Snape as child, so Harry would do well to consider alternatives, especially given what he knows about the man's childhood.

    I did enjoy seeing Harry with his godson and seeing how he's trying to teach him NOT to be a Marauder and prank people and so is Remus. Good for them! I've read several fics where Remus and Harry to some extent encourage Teddy and others to misbehave and be 'little Marauders' and that's always irritated me. Because the Marauders pranks were anything but funny!

    Albus Severus is adorable! Hope we see more of him and how he reacts to Sev and Sirius.

    Will we learn, eventually, how and why the two came back from the Veil?
Title: The Return 04 Aug 2011 5:55 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it. Update soon

    Author's Response: Thanks again.

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