Aww this chapter was so sweet! I can really feel Severus' pain, what great writing!
You know, a really good song to put to the flashback scene in here would be It'll Rain by Bruno Mars. I think it describes perfectly how Severus felt after he lost Lily. It's a great song and a great fic. Too bad they couldn't make it into a movie. I'd love to do a soundtrack for it, I'm a DJ.
| Title: Settling In and Sharing
| 06 Feb 2012 9:43 pm
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| Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed)
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I LOVED this chapter! It made me cry. I'm happy to see that Snapegirl, who is one of my favorite authors, is writing with you.
I am worried that Sirius will cause Jamie and Teddy to get into a lot of trouble. Maybe Remus or Harry should warn them about listening to Sirius when he suggests things to them, so that way they won't get their hides tanned.
Poor Sev! I really hate that he found Lily that way. :( Harry was great though!
This is such a fun story. I like the premise of Severus and Sirius both coming back as children. It's especially nice that Severus will get the childhood that he never had the first time.
Awesome chapter! Can't wait til the next one!
Love it. Hope you can update soon
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