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Title: Brawl at the Burrow 10 Feb 2012 3:27 am
Reviewer: lastcrazyhorn (Signed) [Report This]
    Meep! *flails* I'm so happy to see the other little kids standing up for my Severus!
Title: Brawl at the Burrow 06 Feb 2012 10:05 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, I had a feeling this was coming! It was just bound to happen. I really hope Remus gives it to Sirius good.

    I loved how Rose and Alby stood up and told the truth, not allowing Sirius to get away with his lies.

    I really hope that Teddy and Jamie don't follow Sirius with his attitude towards Severus, that would be awful. And they seem like good kids, so maybe they can knock some sense into Black's brain?

    Will Harry have a talk with Sirius too about his behavior? He should, and tell him he's ashamed of how his godfather has been acting, just like a spoiled brat. That might make Sirius sit up and think about his behavior and how shameful and hurtful it is.
Title: Brawl at the Burrow 05 Feb 2012 12:27 am
Reviewer: Whitsnitch91 (Signed) [Report This]
    Even though I had to go back a chapter or two, as I couldn't quite remember, I enjoyed it very much again!
    Nice chapter, can't wait for the update!
Title: Brawl at the Burrow 04 Feb 2012 11:39 pm
Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed) [Report This]
    I LOVE IT!!!!!!!
Title: Brawl at the Burrow 04 Feb 2012 10:42 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww i love how Rosie and Alby spoke up for Severus! I like the story idea too, I've never read a Sirius Severus deaged together type story and am looking forward to seeing where you take this :)
Title: Brawl at the Burrow 04 Feb 2012 12:40 pm
Reviewer: LadyNiteRaven (Signed) [Report This]
    WOOT!
    I am SO glad you updated again. I thought the story was dropped. More please soon.
Title: Brawl at the Burrow 04 Feb 2012 1:16 am
Reviewer: SammySnapeWolf (Signed) [Report This]
    yes! it was uploaded! lol. ^.^ I love your story.
Title: Brawl at the Burrow 03 Feb 2012 5:58 am
Reviewer: txn (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent spin on this story. I like what you've done--smart to have them in separate homes. It makes their world so much larger. Looking forward to the next installment.
Title: Brawl at the Burrow 03 Feb 2012 4:52 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Just so you know. . . I'm in LOVE with your story! I love how Sev flip-flops (un knowingly of course) between grown and 5.

    Thank you so much.
    V
Title: Brawl at the Burrow 03 Feb 2012 4:18 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I totally love the Malfoys - I always have and hope that Draco and Astoria have more children. One would think that with the death of so many during the wars, that the wizarding world would have its own baby boom.

    Someone should put Sirius in a corner for the next week.

    Glad they aren't in the same family.

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