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Title: Things Will Be Different 07 Jul 2012 3:25 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    awesomeness. i've always loved Remus!
Title: Things Will Be Different 07 Feb 2012 3:33 pm
Reviewer: ds862 (Signed) [Report This]
    So excited that you're updating this story again and with snapegirl's help! It's awesome! I love your child/adult snape!
Title: Things Will Be Different 07 Feb 2012 4:22 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! harry did good reassuring Severus that he's not in trouble. Sometimes what a bully like that needs is a good shot to the face, then they'll leave you alone. Or a good lecture and a paddling.

    I think a good song for Severus and Harry's talk would be Stand By Me.

    As for Sirius and Remus, Katy Perry's Last friday Night kept popping into my head, because the song just reminds me of the Marauders and how crazy and reckless they were, and I could see James and Sirius doing all those things in the song while Remus stands there shaking his head and groaning.

    Update soon!
Title: Things Will Be Different 07 Feb 2012 4:05 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like this story! It's neat to see how both Sirius and Severus are as children with their memories intact.

    I think Sirius should be made to apologize to Severus for everything he did to him in his former life, but I think that will take a miracle.
Title: Things Will Be Different 06 Feb 2012 10:18 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Good for Harry for telling and reassuring Severus that things will be different this time around.

    And Sirius sure deserved that spanking, and I'm glad Remus told him the truth about Severus. I really hope the lesson sticks.

    I still think harry ought to say something to him as well, because that would ensure the point is driven home.

    What a great story I'm so glad I had time today to read it!

    Snapegirl, I'm sorry you're not feeling well. Get well soon, it was worth the wait.
Title: Things Will Be Different 06 Feb 2012 3:33 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    That was one well earned, long overdue spanking. I don't see Sirius changing very much or very soon. The sad thing is, in all matters except for Severus, I love Sirius.

    Looking forward to more.
Title: Things Will Be Different 06 Feb 2012 9:26 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Defo worth the wait! Sirius is such a brat, glad he is being pulled up over it :)
Title: Things Will Be Different 06 Feb 2012 6:33 am
Reviewer: twilight1987 (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter! I am glad that Harry didn't spank Sev... But Remus did Sirius... Because it shows both boys that they aren't going to jump to conclusions and instead will find out what truly happened, which both boys obviously need. I love Rose and Alby! Anyways, you guys both keep up the amazing work!:)
Title: Things Will Be Different 06 Feb 2012 6:04 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it. Can't wait for more. Sirius is probably gonna need lots of talks before he gets rid of his perceptions. Severus will also need time. Update soon

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