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Title: Potter Picnic 27 Sep 2015 11:05 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    So sweet how Severus and Alby get along.

    I still think Sirius needs a spanking the first didn't do anything, but hurt his feelings. It did nothing to curb his behavior or thought processes.

    --his
Title: Potter Picnic 24 Mar 2013 5:49 am
Reviewer: Madi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "But he didn't want to get into a debate about who was the smarter wizard with a four-year-old." THAT MADE MY WHOLE DAY. I LAUGHED SO HARD. IT'S SO CUTE!
Title: Potter Picnic 07 Jul 2012 3:51 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL. I loved this!
Title: Potter Picnic 26 Feb 2012 7:47 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Im loving it..please keep up the great chapters 9/10 xxo
Title: Potter Picnic 19 Feb 2012 5:23 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Is smacking Sirius allowed? More please! Hopefully Sev will get the chance he needs and healing for his soul. As for Sirius.... that boy has a looooonnnnnnggg way to go.
Title: Potter Picnic 17 Feb 2012 8:02 am
Reviewer: twilight1987 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! :)
Title: Potter Picnic 16 Feb 2012 10:11 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahh what a lovely family day out :)
Title: Potter Picnic 16 Feb 2012 4:45 am
Reviewer: Alethea27 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Despite what both Remus and Harry said to Sirius, I think he's still planning to cause whatever trouble he can for Severus. It will be interesting to see what happens between them after Lily comes back. I think Sev, even though he'd never admit it, enjoys being a big brother to Albus
Title: Potter Picnic 16 Feb 2012 2:30 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm definitely enjoying it, update soon please!
Title: Potter Picnic 15 Feb 2012 3:46 pm
Reviewer: ds862 (Signed) [Report This]
    I know I'm enjoying it immensely! I love the relationships you're building between all the characters, especially severus and the world! Thank you so much for sharing your gifts for writing, both of you!

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