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Title: A Troublesome Afternoon 20 Jun 2012 5:25 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh seems like all four boys will be in for it! Funny how it's the *boys* who tend to get in trouble more. :D update soon please!
Title: A Troublesome Afternoon 18 Jun 2012 2:26 am
Reviewer: lirio de amor (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I feel like Dora may make those boys wish they never even thought of outside.... And I do hope nothing dangerous finds Alby and Sev... But it's been awful quiet thus far lol.
Title: A Troublesome Afternoon 18 Jun 2012 1:39 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    The part about Jamie and Sirius sledding down the garage roof was hilarious. Clearly, Sirius has embraced his new status as a child. The interaction between Black Streak, Harry and the children was nice, too. It sounds like both sets of boys are in big trouble though. I'm looking forward to what happens between Sev, Alby and the ashwinder.

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