Harry, Harry, sometimes you just have to give up.
Family time, swimming, sand castles, getting trapped, Severus casting a patronus, caring for his brother, high fever, guess who's pregnant, laughing at Harry... what a fun vacation.
--his
You definitely succeeded! I loved it :)
Haha, it's so like Harry to get flustered at that kind of question. I bet Ginny could handle it just fine. Hehe.
More surprises? Wow, im still in shock from the last one lol.
A terrific chapter! You are on a roll!
I really like the scene where Harry accidentally his Sevy. I think strengthens their relationship as Severus realizes that Harry would never hit him on purpose, not like that.
I
What a fun chapter! From Poppy's touching and informative conversation about Albus Dumbledore and Severus to the hilarious discussion about sex while Harry desparately backpedaled, it was a delight. I'm glad that Alby is developing his own unique talents and happy to hear that Ginny is expecting. It balanced beautifully.
Lol the joys of explaining things to children! :)
"Uh huh. I need to be quiet so you can think, and you take a long time, because you're a man, and men take forever to figure things out." This was the best line ever! Lol! I love that Alby can talk to animals. That's awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter. Great job!
|