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Title: Two Talented Brothers 29 Sep 2015 1:08 am
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry, Harry, sometimes you just have to give up.

    Family time, swimming, sand castles, getting trapped, Severus casting a patronus, caring for his brother, high fever, guess who's pregnant, laughing at Harry... what a fun vacation.

    --his
Title: Two Talented Brothers 24 Jun 2015 7:34 am
Reviewer: Pug Mom 10 (Signed) [Report This]
    like alby's talent...
Title: Two Talented Brothers 06 Aug 2012 2:44 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    You definitely succeeded! I loved it :)
Title: Two Talented Brothers 03 Aug 2012 9:22 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha, it's so like Harry to get flustered at that kind of question. I bet Ginny could handle it just fine. Hehe.

    More surprises? Wow, im still in shock from the last one lol.
Title: Two Talented Brothers 03 Aug 2012 8:33 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    A terrific chapter! You are on a roll!

    I really like the scene where Harry accidentally his Sevy. I think strengthens their relationship as Severus realizes that Harry would never hit him on purpose, not like that.

    I
Title: Two Talented Brothers 03 Aug 2012 2:54 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    What a fun chapter! From Poppy's touching and informative conversation about Albus Dumbledore and Severus to the hilarious discussion about sex while Harry desparately backpedaled, it was a delight. I'm glad that Alby is developing his own unique talents and happy to hear that Ginny is expecting. It balanced beautifully.
Title: Two Talented Brothers 02 Aug 2012 4:44 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol the joys of explaining things to children! :)
Title: Two Talented Brothers 02 Aug 2012 6:59 am
Reviewer: lirio de amor (Signed) [Report This]
    "Uh huh. I need to be quiet so you can think, and you take a long time, because you're a man, and men take forever to figure things out."
    This was the best line ever! Lol! I love that Alby can talk to animals. That's awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter. Great job!

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