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Title: Quidditch Mishaps 30 Sep 2015 2:45 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    It's all Harry's fault. Trouble finds him and anyone with or near him.... lol. Poor Ron. Poor, poor Sirius!

    Alby was quite generous sharing with Cory. I just want to hug them all, but... someone would call the police ... and it would all go downhill from there, so... airhugs for all these adorable kids!

    --his
Title: Quidditch Mishaps 03 Oct 2012 3:53 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Sirius. I wonder of a locater charm would work since he is in dog form? Though with the commotion over Ron, they may not realize he is missing right away.
    I enjoyed Severus with little Indigo. He still has the loyalty he displayed in his past life.
    The scene with Draco scaring the teeangers made me laugh. Draco seems like he would have a dry sense of humor and I think he would enjoy using his family's reputation in that way.
Title: Quidditch Mishaps 02 Oct 2012 9:26 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no poor Ron and Sirius! Hope he isn't lost for long :)
Title: Quidditch Mishaps 02 Oct 2012 6:50 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    that was a great chapter Snapegirl! Brilliant as usual.
    Its good to see that the Malfoy's still got it. haha.
Title: Quidditch Mishaps 02 Oct 2012 6:26 am
Reviewer: lirio de amor (Signed) [Report This]
    You did an awesome job with this chapter! I loved it! You did really well with the quidditch game because normally i hate reading those parts in stories. I know this is the story you and your mom talked about so much, so I hope that you are doing well considering its been three months.
Title: Quidditch Mishaps 02 Oct 2012 6:19 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww! Hope things turn out alright!

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