like that celia love her new life!!!
| Title: Good Magic
| 25 Jan 2013 3:24 am
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| Reviewer: Aconite (Anonymous)
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Hello! This is the first time I've left a review and believe me I've been reading fanfiction for ages! I just want to say I love this story, and many of your others. My favorite of your stories is Away in a Manger. I really love Unveiled because once you get past characters coming back from the dead it's a story about life, family, and the things that truly matter. I love your writing and how relatable your characters are!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. Please leave more if you want. I try very hard to make my stories things that everyone can read and relate to. Most of the problems the characters encounter are from real life problems I or my family and friends have dealt with. It just makes it more easy for people to read when they see a character going through something they have or someone they know has. I try and incorporate scenes from my life into everything I write based on advice from an old English teacher, write what you know about.
It's nice that Celia is settling into her new home. She certainly took to Quidditch. I especially enjoyed the conversation about her cousins beating up anyone who tried to bully her. Harry and Ginny's different reactions were funny.
More please, thank you :3. There were a few of the 'typing-too-fast-syndrome' errors, but nothing else terribly noticeable. Kudos.
Im glad Celia had fun and fits in with the rest of the family. I also like how she is a chip of the old block when it comes to flying, just like Harry.
I hope Celia's dream comes true and Duddly will leave his wife and come and raise Celia. Just the two of them.
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