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Title: Trials and Tribulations 18 Apr 2013 5:27 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it! You are great at merging "the good times" with "the bad."

    Just curious, because I was thinking back to earlier (I believe) in this story when Harry first took Sev flying, what do you think would have happened if Sev still continued to hate flying on a broom stick or naturally have a phobia of heights? Would Harry have left it alone? Been disappointed his "son" didn't share his love? Or what if Sev had refused to even ride the broom with Harry?

    Going back a little further, what would have happened if Sev either refused to accept Harry and Ginny as guardians? Or had an attachment disorder where he couldn't connect with adults like normal kids can?

    Thanks for listening to me babble!
Title: Trials and Tribulations 18 Apr 2013 3:26 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Beth and George's wedding was nice. It was interesting that the bride wore blue rather than the Muggle white gown. Well, well, Sev is no longer Lily's doormat. Living with Harry and his family certainly gave his self-esteem a boost. I was glad that Lily apologized though it may take some convincing for Sev to get over all the bad memories. As to Ron and Hermione's baby, I vote for a little boy.

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