These lot really must like St Mungos, one of seems to be in there every few chapters lol :)
As well as ever!
I love to read this fic! ;-)
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I didn't expect both boys to end up in commercials. That should make it easier for the Lupins' - since Sirius and Jamie are in together, it should stop some of the fighting. I wonder if Celia's mum will see the commercial. Her dad will certainly be proud.
I like the mediwitch, Karla. The scene with her telling off Harry for scolding Sev was really funny. It's kind of nice that both Sev and Lily are benefiting from the burn salve that Sev invented.
| Title: Good Magic
| 25 Jan 2013 3:24 am
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| Reviewer: Aconite (Anonymous)
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Hello! This is the first time I've left a review and believe me I've been reading fanfiction for ages! I just want to say I love this story, and many of your others. My favorite of your stories is Away in a Manger. I really love Unveiled because once you get past characters coming back from the dead it's a story about life, family, and the things that truly matter. I love your writing and how relatable your characters are!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. Please leave more if you want. I try very hard to make my stories things that everyone can read and relate to. Most of the problems the characters encounter are from real life problems I or my family and friends have dealt with. It just makes it more easy for people to read when they see a character going through something they have or someone they know has. I try and incorporate scenes from my life into everything I write based on advice from an old English teacher, write what you know about.
It's nice that Celia is settling into her new home. She certainly took to Quidditch. I especially enjoyed the conversation about her cousins beating up anyone who tried to bully her. Harry and Ginny's different reactions were funny.
More please, thank you :3. There were a few of the 'typing-too-fast-syndrome' errors, but nothing else terribly noticeable. Kudos.
Im glad Celia had fun and fits in with the rest of the family. I also like how she is a chip of the old block when it comes to flying, just like Harry.
I hope Celia's dream comes true and Duddly will leave his wife and come and raise Celia. Just the two of them.
hope you feel better and cannot wait to read more but i know that sometimes the muse just does not come when you want it to. :)
| Title: Little Magic Girl, Lost and Found
| 17 Dec 2012 6:41 am
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| Reviewer: txn (Signed)
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Great Chapter! Nice development for Dudley as a character. Feel Better.
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