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Title: Quidditch Mishaps 02 Oct 2012 6:26 am
Reviewer: lirio de amor (Signed) [Report This]
    You did an awesome job with this chapter! I loved it! You did really well with the quidditch game because normally i hate reading those parts in stories. I know this is the story you and your mom talked about so much, so I hope that you are doing well considering its been three months.
Title: Quidditch Mishaps 02 Oct 2012 6:19 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww! Hope things turn out alright!
Title: Buried Treasure 23 Sep 2012 9:33 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    lovely chapter showing their friendship :)
Title: Buried Treasure 22 Sep 2012 6:58 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter!
Title: Buried Treasure 22 Sep 2012 6:15 am
Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, though I agree with Severus, he shouldn't have been made to aplogize to Lucius! Lucius was being a jerk and he's the one who should aplogize to Sev, I don't care how old he is. First thing you've written I've disagreed with, just don't let it happen again! ;) heh heh heh
Title: Buried Treasure 22 Sep 2012 4:56 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus and Lily may have been punished for digging up the yard and forbidden to look at the book but I think the temptation will be too much for at least one of them. The punishment suited the crime and made them think, at least for now.
Title: Adjusting 13 Sep 2012 3:49 pm
Reviewer: -NightRise- (Signed) [Report This]
    soo sweet....
Title: Adjusting 13 Sep 2012 2:18 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww reminds me of the early months with my colicky red haired little miss! Felt like hell at the time and like Harry I too thought she was trying to deafen me at some points! Totally worth it though :)
Title: Adjusting 13 Sep 2012 8:19 am
Reviewer: Mystery (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the chapter and this whole story. I do hope that Ron and Hermione have baby Hugo in this story. I wouldn't mind if he ended up named after Harry, but I do want him around. Is it normal for a godparent to also be your aunt and uncle? I'm not really familiar with the concept...I would have thought all the kids would have the same godparents, but guess I was wrong about that.

    Author's Response:

    Re:godparents

    Well, I'm Catholic, and the way we choose godparents is that you can have a godparent be a relative or a friend as long as at least one is Catholic and promises to raise the child in that religion should something happen to the parent.  I'm assuming it's the same kind of thing in the wizarding world, with the added responsibility that the godparent is also responsible for the child until he/she turns 17, like a guardian.  In my family it's very normal to choose a sibling for your baby's godparent or even a best friend, it all depends on who you feel most appropriate. I'm a godmother twice, once to my sister's son and once to my brother's son.  One of my sisters is a godparent to five different kids, some on my side of the family and some from her husband's. 

    I figured it only made sense that Harry and Ginny have Ron and Hermione as godparents to their baby girl since they'd already had the Longbottoms and the Malfoys and they would have been close to the Weasleys.  I also like the fact that somebody names their baby after Harry, considering he's their best friend and also famous, and one would think at least one of his friends would have a son who's Harry's namesake.  And Fred's too.  Thanks for reading!

Title: Adjusting 13 Sep 2012 6:16 am
Reviewer: Solarfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Great Chapter as usual. I laughed at how Harry and Sevvy got Alby to agree to stay. I've used the same trick on a five year old. She decided she was going to walk home to her Mommy so my 9 year old niece packed up her bag and helped her put her shoes on. We then walked her to the mailbox and waved as she attempted to get home. She returned to us sighing that she did not know which way to go at the stop sign. I can't wait until the next chapter.

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