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Title: Unwelcome Guests 29 Jun 2012 2:33 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    God, what a chapter! Loved how Sev protected Alby, just like he was his real big "brudder". So sweet, but oh! I hope Harry nails those centaurs' hides to a wall! Poor Sevvy!

    I also liked the lupin brothers bonding, reminded me of me and my sisters.

    So sorry about your mom, my prayers and well wishes go out to you. Take all the time you need before you return to your writing.
Title: Unwelcome Guests 29 Jun 2012 2:30 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a brilliant chapter, and even more so given that you wrote it during a time of such sadness. I'm really hoping that Harry kicks those centaurs' butts over the rainbow. And I like how Sirius is starting to reflect on his past and how wrong he was.

    You update whenever you feel the time is right, I'll be here waiting for you. So sorry for your loss, nothing is as bad as losing a mom. *sends virtual hugs and flowers*
Title: Unwelcome Guests 29 Jun 2012 2:21 am
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    I am soo sorry for you loss, I have been there myself and it is not easy.. time heals but never completely.... God bless.....
Title: Unwelcome Guests 29 Jun 2012 1:02 am
Reviewer: lirio de amor (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm sorry to hear about your mom. I am praying for you and your family. Your chapter was great! I look forward to more whenever you feel ready to write. Definitely make sure you take care of yourself during this difficult time.
Title: A Troublesome Afternoon 20 Jun 2012 5:25 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh seems like all four boys will be in for it! Funny how it's the *boys* who tend to get in trouble more. :D update soon please!
Title: Tell Me A Story 20 Jun 2012 5:16 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, that was a really sweet chapter!
Title: A Troublesome Afternoon 18 Jun 2012 2:26 am
Reviewer: lirio de amor (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I feel like Dora may make those boys wish they never even thought of outside.... And I do hope nothing dangerous finds Alby and Sev... But it's been awful quiet thus far lol.
Title: A Troublesome Afternoon 18 Jun 2012 1:39 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    The part about Jamie and Sirius sledding down the garage roof was hilarious. Clearly, Sirius has embraced his new status as a child. The interaction between Black Streak, Harry and the children was nice, too. It sounds like both sets of boys are in big trouble though. I'm looking forward to what happens between Sev, Alby and the ashwinder.
Title: Tell Me A Story 16 Jun 2012 10:38 am
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    Super cute...I love Severus and Alby
Title: Tell Me A Story 16 Jun 2012 9:11 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww fluffyness :D

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