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Title: Tell Me A Story 16 Jun 2012 9:11 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww fluffyness :D
Title: Tell Me A Story 16 Jun 2012 2:00 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    fantastic chapter Snapegirl
Title: The Art of Persuasion 08 Jun 2012 7:32 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww how lovely to see Sev behave like a normal child, though it is funny to see him giving Harry redhead advice! It would be good to see him get a familiar too, Severus always struck me as an owl or cat person :)
Title: The Art of Persuasion 07 Jun 2012 7:33 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    That was sweet!

    Yes, get him a familiar--something really cool and unique!
Title: The Art of Persuasion 07 Jun 2012 8:40 am
Reviewer: lirio de amor (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! A familiar for Sev would be sweet... Like a cat... Because cats are easier to maintain for a little boy... And he is still a little boy. I love how Sev was able to get Alby to take those potions... The whole chapter was sweet:) fantastic job!
Title: The Art of Persuasion 07 Jun 2012 7:10 am
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    This was aweome *melted*

    I have nothing else to say, except that it rocked..I love Harry and Snape bonding moments...and ALby
Title: The Art of Persuasion 07 Jun 2012 6:45 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    awww, that was the sweetest thing ever! It makes me feel all warm inside. I'm so happy Severus is beginning to like Harry. They are getting on so well now.

    I'd love to see Sev with a familiar. But won't the other children get jealous? Maybe they should have a family pet instead? Either way, the love of a pet could bring miracles.
Title: Pensieve Problems 05 Jun 2012 1:04 am
Reviewer: twilightchicky (Signed) [Report This]
    I am loving this story! I didn't realize it was a WIP until I got to the end, and now I'm dying to know what happens next. This is a wonderful idea for a second chance for Severus and Sirius although I would like to shake Sirius. Hopefully now he's learned his lesson! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Title: Pensieve Problems 28 May 2012 7:24 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter. I think Harry was perfectly fair in the punishment he gave Sirius. And I liked it that he admitted that he should have been punished for doing the same thing back in his fifth year. But at least Sirius really understands that he was wrong about Severus. Hopefully, the war between the two of them will be over soon.

    Bravo!
Title: Pensieve Problems 26 May 2012 4:39 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    I think Harry was very fair, poor Sev would be devestated if he knew, I hope Sirius will let it go now :)

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