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Title: Past Regrets 20 Mar 2012 3:13 am
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    like it..good job!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much, story's been updated at last!
Title: Past Regrets 19 Mar 2012 4:28 pm
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter!!

    I absolutely loved the part about "And a redeemed soul is purer than one who has never looked into the teeth of darkness..." What a powerful and poignant comment.

    Great job of clearing the air a bit with Neville and Draco.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I liked that line too.

    There's a new updated finally!

Title: Past Regrets 19 Mar 2012 4:16 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely to see an update! :)

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! There's a new update finally!
Title: Past Regrets 19 Mar 2012 3:21 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked Frankie and it was good that Sev and Draco had there talk.

    He will come to trust Harry but it will take time.

    Author's Response: Yes, that's true! A new update is here!
Title: Past Regrets 19 Mar 2012 12:44 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so excited! I was waiting for this to update and now it has! Yay! Loved the chapter!

    Frankie is adorable and shows the intuition of her mother and the compassion of her father.

    I liked how Neville talked with Severus and understood the difference between a strict teacher and one who was bat sh*** crazy, like Umbridge or the Carrows.

    I nearly cried with the part with Draco. Severus is so cute! I'm glad Sev told Draco he forgives him.

    Poor Harry's jealous! Aww!

    Please update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! A new updated has been posted.
Title: Past Regrets 19 Mar 2012 6:15 am
Reviewer: ds862 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! It must be really hard to try to bounce in Snape's character between kid shy and adult snark but you do it well! I love how Harry got jealous of Snape and Draco. Looking forward to the two of them mucking through their relationship! :) Hope you can update again soon, but I know you have lots of stories you work on! :)

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! I've finally updated again.
Title: Past Regrets 19 Mar 2012 5:57 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    I was just saying in the shoutbox with DrSnape that I agreed with them about missing this story and boom, UPDATE!!!!! Love it, can't wait for more. Love it.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! I've finally updated again!
Title: Potter Picnic 26 Feb 2012 7:47 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Im loving it..please keep up the great chapters 9/10 xxo
Title: Potter Picnic 19 Feb 2012 5:23 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Is smacking Sirius allowed? More please! Hopefully Sev will get the chance he needs and healing for his soul. As for Sirius.... that boy has a looooonnnnnnggg way to go.
Title: Reassurances 17 Feb 2012 11:55 pm
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    Really good chapter...though it was a bit hard to read

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