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Reviews For UnVeiled
Author's Response: Thanks so much, story's been updated at last!
I absolutely loved the part about "And a redeemed soul is purer than one who has never looked into the teeth of darkness..." What a powerful and poignant comment. Great job of clearing the air a bit with Neville and Draco. Author's Response: Thanks! I liked that line too. There's a new updated finally!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! There's a new update finally!
He will come to trust Harry but it will take time. Author's Response: Yes, that's true! A new update is here!
Frankie is adorable and shows the intuition of her mother and the compassion of her father. I liked how Neville talked with Severus and understood the difference between a strict teacher and one who was bat sh*** crazy, like Umbridge or the Carrows. I nearly cried with the part with Draco. Severus is so cute! I'm glad Sev told Draco he forgives him. Poor Harry's jealous! Aww! Please update soon! Author's Response: Thanks so much! A new updated has been posted.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I've finally updated again.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I've finally updated again!
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