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Title: Reassurances 08 Feb 2012 3:23 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it. Can't wait for more. Update soon
Title: Things Will Be Different 07 Feb 2012 3:33 pm
Reviewer: ds862 (Signed) [Report This]
    So excited that you're updating this story again and with snapegirl's help! It's awesome! I love your child/adult snape!
Title: Things Will Be Different 07 Feb 2012 4:22 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! harry did good reassuring Severus that he's not in trouble. Sometimes what a bully like that needs is a good shot to the face, then they'll leave you alone. Or a good lecture and a paddling.

    I think a good song for Severus and Harry's talk would be Stand By Me.

    As for Sirius and Remus, Katy Perry's Last friday Night kept popping into my head, because the song just reminds me of the Marauders and how crazy and reckless they were, and I could see James and Sirius doing all those things in the song while Remus stands there shaking his head and groaning.

    Update soon!
Title: Settling In and Sharing 07 Feb 2012 4:08 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww this chapter was so sweet! I can really feel Severus' pain, what great writing!

    You know, a really good song to put to the flashback scene in here would be It'll Rain by Bruno Mars. I think it describes perfectly how Severus felt after he lost Lily. It's a great song and a great fic. Too bad they couldn't make it into a movie. I'd love to do a soundtrack for it, I'm a DJ.
Title: Things Will Be Different 07 Feb 2012 4:05 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like this story! It's neat to see how both Sirius and Severus are as children with their memories intact.

    I think Sirius should be made to apologize to Severus for everything he did to him in his former life, but I think that will take a miracle.
Title: Things Will Be Different 06 Feb 2012 10:18 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Good for Harry for telling and reassuring Severus that things will be different this time around.

    And Sirius sure deserved that spanking, and I'm glad Remus told him the truth about Severus. I really hope the lesson sticks.

    I still think harry ought to say something to him as well, because that would ensure the point is driven home.

    What a great story I'm so glad I had time today to read it!

    Snapegirl, I'm sorry you're not feeling well. Get well soon, it was worth the wait.
Title: Brawl at the Burrow 06 Feb 2012 10:05 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, I had a feeling this was coming! It was just bound to happen. I really hope Remus gives it to Sirius good.

    I loved how Rose and Alby stood up and told the truth, not allowing Sirius to get away with his lies.

    I really hope that Teddy and Jamie don't follow Sirius with his attitude towards Severus, that would be awful. And they seem like good kids, so maybe they can knock some sense into Black's brain?

    Will Harry have a talk with Sirius too about his behavior? He should, and tell him he's ashamed of how his godfather has been acting, just like a spoiled brat. That might make Sirius sit up and think about his behavior and how shameful and hurtful it is.
Title: Settling In and Sharing 06 Feb 2012 9:43 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I LOVED this chapter! It made me cry. I'm happy to see that Snapegirl, who is one of my favorite authors, is writing with you.

    I am worried that Sirius will cause Jamie and Teddy to get into a lot of trouble. Maybe Remus or Harry should warn them about listening to Sirius when he suggests things to them, so that way they won't get their hides tanned.

    Poor Sev! I really hate that he found Lily that way. :( Harry was great though!
Title: Expectations and Understandings 06 Feb 2012 9:36 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Good, I'm glad that Remus laid down the law to Sirius. of course, Sirius won't take Lupin seriously (no pun intended) until he pushes the werewolf too far and Remus does what he said he would.

    And oh, I'd love to see Harry spanking Sirius, that would be too funny!

    I liked the little talk between Severus and Harry it was good to see them talking, I missed that in the last book.

    Great job so far!

    I think, if Harry goes slowly and carefully, he will win Severus' trust.
Title: Severus' Tantrum 06 Feb 2012 9:27 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Grrr! What Sirius said to Severus was totally nasty and uncalled for. Now HE should have gotten a smack for that.

    I felt so bad for Severus here! He was hurting so much and I'm glad Lily came and told him that she would return for him. Hopefully he can have the life he was denied before.

    It's good that Harry defends him and hugs him.

    I hope somebody sets Sirius straight, because he clearly has no compassion for anyone except himself, the selfish little beast. Loving this!

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