Oh, now the fireworks start. I don't envy Harry trying to keep the peace between THOSE two. They're like Texans and Comanches.
One thing did surprise me was that Harry's immediate response to Severus' stubbornness was a smack. Given his own childhood, I would think he'd be more likely to reason first, because even though Severus is five physically, he's also an adult in his head and let's not forget, he WAS Harry's professor for all of his life, so you can't expect him to just 'obey' Harry because he says so. That's not realistic.
Plus, I doubt if force ever worked well with Snape as child, so Harry would do well to consider alternatives, especially given what he knows about the man's childhood.
I did enjoy seeing Harry with his godson and seeing how he's trying to teach him NOT to be a Marauder and prank people and so is Remus. Good for them! I've read several fics where Remus and Harry to some extent encourage Teddy and others to misbehave and be 'little Marauders' and that's always irritated me. Because the Marauders pranks were anything but funny!
Albus Severus is adorable! Hope we see more of him and how he reacts to Sev and Sirius.
Will we learn, eventually, how and why the two came back from the Veil?
Very interesting start! usually I don't read stories where Severus dies, because I hate that he died in the books, but since you're going to bring him back, I'll give this a shot.
I like how you changed things around and made a lot of the former kids in the books teachers. Hopefully they'll be better than the terrible ones (Umbridge, Lockhart, Quirrell) they had.
That was one well earned, long overdue spanking. I don't see Sirius changing very much or very soon. The sad thing is, in all matters except for Severus, I love Sirius.
Looking forward to more.
Defo worth the wait! Sirius is such a brat, glad he is being pulled up over it :)
Excellent chapter! I am glad that Harry didn't spank Sev... But Remus did Sirius... Because it shows both boys that they aren't going to jump to conclusions and instead will find out what truly happened, which both boys obviously need. I love Rose and Alby! Anyways, you guys both keep up the amazing work!:)
Love it. Can't wait for more. Sirius is probably gonna need lots of talks before he gets rid of his perceptions. Severus will also need time. Update soon
Even though I had to go back a chapter or two, as I couldn't quite remember, I enjoyed it very much again!
Nice chapter, can't wait for the update!
Aww i love how Rosie and Alby spoke up for Severus! I like the story idea too, I've never read a Sirius Severus deaged together type story and am looking forward to seeing where you take this :)
WOOT!
I am SO glad you updated again. I thought the story was dropped. More please soon.
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