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Title: Baby Mine 28 Jul 2014 8:31 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Camille is my little sister's name....
    Love this story!!!
Title: Choices 06 Jun 2014 7:34 am
Reviewer: 44MissLang (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Your fic is simply beautiful! I love the slow bonding between Harry and Severus. Seriously best fic ive read so far. I love and i love you!
Title: Choices 05 Nov 2013 11:57 am
Reviewer: Gillian (Anonymous) [Report This]
    love love love loved it
Title: Little Magic Girl, Lost and Found 23 Oct 2013 9:26 am
Reviewer: BRIANA (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I LOVE IT
Title: Choices 28 Jul 2013 10:57 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Finally got round to finishing this story!! Ive been meaning to finish it for ages and im so glad I did, I really did enjoy it :)
Title: Choices 29 Apr 2013 4:28 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved how you ended it. I'm glad Sev isn't just forgiving everyone and that Harry does not expect him to just forgive everyone. That makes me happy. I love that Harry misinterprets that Severus is talking about Sirius instead of Lily. I look forward to your next story and know I have to catch up with Common Interests again.

    I'm still curious what would have happened if Sev in your story would have hated or at least disliked quidditch. I look forward to re-reading this story in the future!

    Great job!
Title: Choices 28 Apr 2013 6:09 am
Reviewer: txn (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't believe it's over! I never want it to end. I can't wait for the sequel. Thanks so much for all of your hard work and wonderful writing!
Title: Choices 28 Apr 2013 4:48 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a good way to end this part. Lily did a lot of damage to Sev in their first lives and he will need time to get over the hurt and betrayal. It sounds like he will have a more realistic view of her this time around and if they do end up together as more than friends it will be as equals.
Title: Choices 28 Apr 2013 2:15 am
Reviewer: bianca (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome story!
    I like that you let Snape see that it's ok for him to be angry and hurt over what Lily did to him in his earlier life, and that it's ok to take his time to come to terms with it.
    I Love that Lily seems to realize that she was not a good friend to Snape in her previous life, and that in their new lives, things are more equal between them - he is not some lesser being, "beneath" her notice.
Title: Choices 28 Apr 2013 12:55 am
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    oh no its over???? I loved this story... it was well done, well written and a good read...

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