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Title: Choices 27 Apr 2013 11:14 pm
Reviewer: JWOJPfan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was a brilliant and most enjoyable story! Thanks for sharing it. I look forward to the sequel, whenever you get around to writing it!
Title: Congratulations, It's A 23 Apr 2013 2:50 am
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice!!! surprise, good job
Title: Congratulations, It's A 23 Apr 2013 1:33 am
Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant ending to an awesome and amazing story!!! I hope you write more in the future, you have a real talent for it!

    Author's Response: Actually, there's one more chapter.
Title: Congratulations, It's A 22 Apr 2013 10:51 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I was surprised. Hermione and Ron are going to have their hands full with triplets. I liked that they decided to make George the godfather to baby Fred. It seems like a really nice idea.
Title: Congratulations, It's A 22 Apr 2013 8:47 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    awwwww Three wow. They are not going to be getting any sleep for a year or 2. They are going to need a lot of help.
Title: Trials and Tribulations 18 Apr 2013 5:27 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it! You are great at merging "the good times" with "the bad."

    Just curious, because I was thinking back to earlier (I believe) in this story when Harry first took Sev flying, what do you think would have happened if Sev still continued to hate flying on a broom stick or naturally have a phobia of heights? Would Harry have left it alone? Been disappointed his "son" didn't share his love? Or what if Sev had refused to even ride the broom with Harry?

    Going back a little further, what would have happened if Sev either refused to accept Harry and Ginny as guardians? Or had an attachment disorder where he couldn't connect with adults like normal kids can?

    Thanks for listening to me babble!
Title: Trials and Tribulations 18 Apr 2013 3:26 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Beth and George's wedding was nice. It was interesting that the bride wore blue rather than the Muggle white gown. Well, well, Sev is no longer Lily's doormat. Living with Harry and his family certainly gave his self-esteem a boost. I was glad that Lily apologized though it may take some convincing for Sev to get over all the bad memories. As to Ron and Hermione's baby, I vote for a little boy.
Title: The Power of the Hallows 11 Apr 2013 4:05 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I think Sev will help Sirius get rid of his nightmares. The two boys have been getting along better in this life than they did in the last. I'm curious to find out what kind of nightmares they are though.
Title: Justice 09 Apr 2013 12:52 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! Please please update again soon, I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Title: Justice 09 Apr 2013 12:01 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. Pansy's come down in the world. Goyle's as dumb as a box of rocks. You would have to be stupid not to think that the Malfoy's would have questiom Lily since she was living with them if they were interesting in getting Voldemort fo return. And the comment about getting the kids to talk because they were scared was wonderful. Yes. that was so successful so far. Thanks for a good chapter and looking forward to how Harry is faring.

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