What an interesting and sad (yet strangely happy) start to your story. I loved Harry’s patronus message.
Oh! I started crying when I read about Ginny. I sure hope Snape can help her once she's recovered. Sometimes I wonder if a condition like that is worse on the family than death.
Love Anna. She and Lily are so cute together and it's obvious that Snape is a good father. maybe he was able to relax and let more of his good side through without the painful and awful death eater memories!
Oh, I love this chapter! My only quibble is that Surrey is a county not a town so if Severus lived on the outskirts of Surrey he'd be living in a different county. Your ending line was utterly perfect!
Excellent 1st chapter. Loved it from beginning to end. "The Prince had Returned" - thank you.
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| 05 Aug 2011 9:40 am
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| Title: Anna Squires
| 05 Aug 2011 3:45 am
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absolutely amazing! can't wait till your next chapter! hope Snape gets his memories back!
Amazing! I love it and simply can't wait for more! :) x
hahaha! I love that last line!
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| 04 Aug 2011 5:28 pm
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This has the beginnings of a darn good fic. I really want to see what happens with snape, Anna, Harry and even Ginny.
I read this story on FFNet and fully intend to read it again here. This is a wonderful story and I must say you have one of the best grasps of Severus' and Harry's characters I have ever read in fan fiction.
Not to mention the girls are just adorable!
I have read both of you other stories here and you have quickly become one of my favourite authors. I look forward to the next chapter.
"The Prince has returned"...indeed he has.
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