Very nice ending chapter. Thanks for your lovely story.
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| 18 Apr 2020 10:05 pm
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| Reviewer: NoK (Signed)
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Beautiful, simply beautiful.
| Title: His Success, His Life
| 18 Jun 2014 8:20 am
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| Reviewer: Lee Brown (Anonymous)
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I was just casting about for interesting HP stories and this one popped up. I can't tell you how much I have enjoyed it. I never liked Severus Snape's ultimate fate and this story gives him redemption and a good life. If I was giving it a score, it would be a 9, because I rarely admit perfection but this is really close.
| Title: His Success, His Life
| 04 Feb 2013 4:45 am
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| Reviewer: Abraxan (Anonymous)
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Love the story. Very well written. I just wish Harry and Ginny had a "happily ever after" - if anyone ever deserved it, it's Harry.
I liked the happy Snape. It was so different and so nice. I wondered what made the elves worship Snape. At first I couldn't figure out why Ginny's accident was relevant. It seemed to serve no purpose. But then when Snape's Muggle specialty was the brain having him there to help in her recovery made sense and drew him into the family even more.
an excellent story, Very well done.
I have just read over this whole fic and it's more than I expected, in fact it's simply incredible and I really enjoyed reading it, even when things were emotional or tough for the characters. You wrote this story well and true, though a simple review doesn't seem to be enough of a "thanks" to sharing such a story.
I couldn't comment on a favourite part of such, as the entire story itself feels complete. The ending, though I would have liked Ginny to be more of her old self, was simply perfect. I loved the final lines.
So thanks again for sharing this story! :)
| Title: His Success, His Life
| 24 Sep 2011 11:57 pm
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| Reviewer: elizzza (Signed)
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I enjoyed this story. Thank you. The only thing is ... what did Severus do that made the houseelves worship him? Did I miss a section of the story?
I hope you know that Surrey is a COUNTY. It has plenty of towns and villages of its own. In ch 1 it looked as if you thought Surrey was a small village.
This is absolutely adorable! I have simply loved reading this each week as a new chapter is added and am just in love with all of the wonderful characters you have painted - I want more, but you've ended it so perfectly, I don't know how you could continue on from here xx
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