Definitely interesting. I love your Snape and Lily's intervention. I'm glad I found your story.
Very interesting developments; I like how you're portraying Snape's thought processes. One question, however, wouldn't Severus recognise Lily's voice?
Author's Response: Oh, but he will :)
I love the way the woman warns Harry against Quirrell. I'm starting to have a hunch about who she is...
Author's Response: I am glad that the identity of the woman wasn't glaringly obvious. I wanted there to be a bit of an 'ah ha' moment at the beginning of chapter three. The point, though, was really more to make it obvious that Harry has no clue who the woman is.
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