Still going well. I love Lily! She's doing great things. I'm having fun reading your story.
Great chapter; I love how you've explained Lily's presence in Harry's life
Oh my God - I love this!! It's so well written and extremely gripping. I love the way you're able to inject some humour in there too. Please, PLEASE write more!!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! That review will boost my ego for days!
Nice start! I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Your approach IS original. I really enjoyed the extra details that we didn't get from the book - like Severus' internal monologue on the garlic. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, I am glad you liked it and find it original! I have been dying to right a Severus and Harry guardian story, but I wanted it to be something different.
Aha, so I was right! I love this chapter. Go Lily, speak something more to Severus!
Author's Response: Oh she will be saying more to Severus. Just wait until Harry's first potions class :)
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