Nice story! I love the premise. I'll be waiting anxiously for your next update.
It's coming along nicely! I like the interaction so far. More please!
KCK-Lumcer
| Title: Chapter 6
| 03 Sep 2011 11:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter but could you please follow writing rules and put speech by a new person on a new line? This would make your story easier to follow thank you
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out. For whatever reason, I sometimes do it and sometimes don't; I know that must be really irritating to read!
| Title: Chapter 6
| 01 Sep 2011 5:20 am
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| Reviewer: Rye (Signed)
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Yesss! thank you! Please update the next chapter soon!!!
Wonderful chapter. Thanks for the update. I love how Lily gets Sev's attention-over and over again!
V.
I really like this story and the originality of it! Please update again soon, I can't wait! :D
Great chapter. I like your writing just fine. You certainly kept me engrossed in the story.
I don't think Lily is OOC.
She's the wife of a Marauder, a mother, and most importantly... a RED HEAD!
If that doesn't equal a fiery temper, I don't know what will!
And also best friends with Snape.
Severus definitely has a lot to think of. He clearly wasn't liking what he was reading between the lines. Petunia had best watch out, because it's not just Lily who is going to be after her!
Referring to the CEN: Hmm...you know the saying about a mothers? Well, in my mind Lily is a mother bear, willing not only to die for but to kill to protect her cub. That being said I will hardly be surprised if she's more than a bit darker than normal; in fact, I look forward to the blood bath! :D
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