More!!
Author's Response: Soon!! :)
No if Lily could just have a conversation with Sev, maybe things would turn out better for Harry. Great chapter!
I think this chapter came out beautifully and I can't wait to read more! Love your story!
Author's Response: Thank you, I was pretty nervous about this chapter so I am glad you liked it!
I hope Severus caught the hint that Lily just gave him. He had best learn to be nicer to her baby or she'll punish him but good. However is he going to explain what happened to his desk? LOL!! I really hope that Lily will be able to make him actually LOOK at Harry and see him as the rather sweet, shy child he is rather than continuing to assume that he's a James clone.
Author's Response: If anyone can make Severus see reason, it is Lily, ha! Harry's detention is coming up, so Severus may just have another chance with him :)
Great chapter; I love how you've explained Lily's presence in Harry's life
Very interesting developments; I like how you're portraying Snape's thought processes. One question, however, wouldn't Severus recognise Lily's voice?
Author's Response: Oh, but he will :)
Very interesting premise and an enjoyable and well written first chapter; I liked the subtlety of the events ^^
Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you thought it was well written; I haven't written anything except research papers in more than five years so I was nervous about posting my fics.
Oh my God - I love this!! It's so well written and extremely gripping. I love the way you're able to inject some humour in there too. Please, PLEASE write more!!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! That review will boost my ego for days!
Nice start! I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Your approach IS original. I really enjoyed the extra details that we didn't get from the book - like Severus' internal monologue on the garlic. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, I am glad you liked it and find it original! I have been dying to right a Severus and Harry guardian story, but I wanted it to be something different.
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