Ron is such a terrible friend. I’m confused about how Harry got so hurt on his head as well. Was it the Dursley’s, and if so why would Petunia be worried for him?
| Title: Chapter 3
| 30 Aug 2011 12:57 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Good but I felt it might be a bit rushed in places
Author's Response: Yeah I I'm realizing that now as well, but I've written about 6 and a half chapter now, and I'm trying to pay extra attention on not rushing it :) Thanks for poiting it out, though ;)
Great start!!! I look forward to your updates.
Oh dear........did you have to stop???
Gah! Please update soon. I loved these three chapters, but I suspected I would regret starting this before it was farther along. How is it I always know when a cliffie is going to happen? Kudos on a wonderful three chapters.
when the abuse comes out Ron is going to regret saying what he said to Harry
and I hope for Harry's sake that Snape will actually help as it is apparent that harry needs all the help he can get. Please let him be ok.
Can't wait to read more
Good job. I am enjoying this a ton! Be careful not to rush the story too much-people want to enjoy your great writing! But I am hooked!
Love it....please don't leave us in suspense...update soon :)
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