I love this story, it's so well-written and engaging. Completely realistic. I feel you have the canon characters spot on and I love the OCs. Eagerly anticipating updates
I love this idea, love Harry's kids. Is there gonna. be some interaction with grandpa Severus ?
I'd love to see a scene after the famous Parselmouth incident at school where Sev is talking to Harry about it. So just out of curiousity when will Severus be warming up to Harry? Or does he ever?
Author's Response: Because this is just 'snippet's we're probably only going to be seeing one scene from each of the seven years, so I don't know how much warming you will see. Your views on Harry's life at this point will just be choppy little pieces that the kids are hearing secondhand. We've already done year 1 and 2 with the first two chapters, so I'm not sure we'll get a chance to see anything near the parslemouth incident.
I enjoyed reading this chapter! I would love to read more about how Harry got adopted though I'm sure you're already including that...I would love to see a scene where Harry pranks Snape. That would be quite funny to read.. I would enjoy reading about Sev's reactions and the whole bonding of family thing.
Please update again!
I like it very much, and I'd love to see more!
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