ah this is much better!
Author's Response: Thanks!!
This is well done, and a realistic approach that doesn't go for easy, pat solutions. I like that Harry's taking some initiative in researching his own problems. I'm looking forward to the development of his relationship with Snape. Excellent first fic.
Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate your feedback! It really helps me move forward with writing when I see that people are enjoying the story.
So will Harry be able to resist the temptation of the bottle? How will their therapy sessions progress?
Author's Response: We'll see! I should have another chapter posted by tonight or tomorrow.
Yet another amazing chapter! I feel so sorry for Harry. He is so lost and confused. I hope that Sev is able to help him before he does something drastic... I love how Sev is taking his time with Harry though, and not pushing him. Excellent job!=)
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