So what will Harry's writing show him? What will Harry say to Severus? How will Harry handle his friends and any comments they might make? Please write more!!!
Oh dear, well at least Harry is finally opening up about what is wrong.
Good chapter, I can't wait for the next one.
Aw! Finally someone is going to help Harry! Awesome chapter!
Another great chapter! =)
I hope you update soon! I'm enjoying this story and seeing how things are handled.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm excited to have you post a comment in my first fic, because I've read so many of yours. I love your work, and now that I'm writing and can see how important reviews are, I vow to review much more frequently!
It's very interesting! Can't wait for more!
Glad to see that Snape's getting a clue. Dumbledore's attitude is classic though, being concerned for Harry while totally clueless that he's behind a lot of Harry's problems because he hasn't bothered to check up on him. I loved Harry's reaction to Dumbledore's 'little talk'. Likewise McGonagall. Still very much enjoying this. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate your comments because it's good to know I'm getting the right points across - with Dumbledore and McGonagall for example. I don't want to drag out the wait before the Harry and Snape talk, but I think it's time. I love getting feedback because it helps me shape and write the story. Thank you!!
Typical Dumbledore; he's trying to manipulate both Harry and Snape here, but maybe it's not such a bad idea what he's trying to do. Harry needs help, and maybe, just maybe, Snape will start to see who Harry really is.
Great chappie. I am looking foward to the next one.
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