| Title: Chapter 2
| 25 Oct 2022 3:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A lot of information and a cliff hanger thank you
That’s quite a cliffhanger! I’m looking forward to seeing the confrontation ahead.
More surprises. I like that Dudley made something of himself and even married a witch. That must have infuriated Petunia. More magic in the family. Looking forward to the confrontation with Snape.
We know that Severus Snape is dead but we don't know for sure if his father is. Could the Snape they're talking about be his grandfather?
We know that Severus Snape is dead but we don't know for sure if his father is. Could the Snape they're talking about be his grandfather?
Hello, amazing story, I like this brother's story.
But i think that you forget that in chapter 1 the note left with Evan said : ‘ “Born 21 September 1978. Evan Prince. Son of Severus…” dammit, I can’t read it… “and-' so they already knowthe day of Evan birth.
Read you soon
Phoenix
| Title: Chapter 2
| 12 Sep 2011 8:40 am
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| Reviewer: Hobbit (Anonymous)
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Feel like I've written too many critical reviews lately.
So I've come to review this one, and say it's absolutely amazing and I love it, it mostly flows really well and I did *not* see that twist coming about Snape still being alive. =D
So great job and I look forward to more!
Ooh, I have to say I was hesitant to read this story but it is getting quite interesting, and I am glad I did. I look forward to the next chapter!
oh wow, now you've got my attention!
This story is Absolutely amazing! It is so exciting!
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