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Title: Welcome to Gryffindor House 13 Apr 2012 10:18 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm loving Harry so far!
Title: Welcome to Gryffindor House 13 Apr 2012 11:38 am
Reviewer: Foreverhope (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Aww! Harry running around and half-tripping in wizarding robes for the first time is an adorable image!

    I love his blunt-ness with McGonagall, and also her gentle understanding. In cannon, and often in fandom, we see a McGonagall who is far less attentive than she out to be. So I like that good ol' Minnie is really stepping up to the plate in this fic.

    Unrelated: Sorry to nit-pick, but it should be "Muggle-born," not Muggle, for Hermione in the third paragraph. (I know you know that, and it's just a typo, but I figured I should point it out.)

    Nice work. I'm excited to read the rest!

Title: Welcome to Gryffindor House 12 Sep 2011 3:46 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    It is great that you have Professors McGonagall and Snape explaining things to Harry, and also show how important routine is to him, as well as some of the differences in how he thinks compared to others. His straight forwardness might seem rude to some, but in reality, in his thinking, he is just being honest. I like how you are delineating this for the reader, and making it very entertaining at the same time.

    Author's Response: Thank you. I am glad you found it entertaining but enlightening. Expect more Literal Harry in the chapters to come.

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