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Reviews For Different, Not Defective
Aww! Harry running around and half-tripping in wizarding robes for the first time is an adorable image! I love his blunt-ness with McGonagall, and also her gentle understanding. In cannon, and often in fandom, we see a McGonagall who is far less attentive than she out to be. So I like that good ol' Minnie is really stepping up to the plate in this fic. Unrelated: Sorry to nit-pick, but it should be "Muggle-born," not Muggle, for Hermione in the third paragraph. (I know you know that, and it's just a typo, but I figured I should point it out.) Nice work. I'm excited to read the rest!
Author's Response: Thank you. I am glad you found it entertaining but enlightening. Expect more Literal Harry in the chapters to come. |
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