Oh no! And things were going quite well...
| Title: Potions
| 13 Apr 2012 11:43 am
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| Reviewer: Foreverhope (Anonymous)
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Your writing is an absolute treat to read. Just thought that you should know.
I really like how you changed things up during this first week of school, and how it was Harry who got the answers correct. Ron's loyalty toward him is also a wonderful touch, as is Snape's continued understanding and patience. I like that it is Malfoy who doesn't know the answers, and that Snape doesn't seem to vilify any one student.
Author's Response: Ah yes. Malfoy. What is he plotting?
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