This was definitely an interesting chapter and Snape handled the situation rather well.
This chapter was a stroke of genius. I like how you showed Harry's differentiated thinking and how literal he takes everything. In his mind, he followed instructions perfectly, and, yes, that could be taken by an adult as being rather cheeky or smart, but in reality, Harry followed the letter of the law. He seems to see things as very black and white and you do an excellent job of explaining that to the reader.
Author's Response: Thank you! Harry's literal thinking will, of course, be getting him into some more scrapes along the way.
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