Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Sorting 13 Apr 2012 10:14 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry...you're off to a great start!
Title: Chapter 11 13 Apr 2012 5:10 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    A very lovely update. I'd forgotten about this wonderful story, so I went back and reread it from the beginning. Here's hoping you update again soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you. I am working on updates, but work is getting in the way.
Title: Chapter 11 13 Apr 2012 3:04 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    I was so excited when I saw a new chapter!!!! I am in love with this story

    I loved this chapter you got to see just how much Poppy cares for harry
    and minerva love her

    snape has fallen for harry and he is a great ally
Title: Detention 13 Apr 2012 11:58 am
Reviewer: Foreverhope (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is beautiful. Your writing is eloquent, and this story is cutting me to my core. Well done!
Title: Potions 13 Apr 2012 11:43 am
Reviewer: Foreverhope (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Your writing is an absolute treat to read. Just thought that you should know.
Title: Welcome to Gryffindor House 13 Apr 2012 11:38 am
Reviewer: Foreverhope (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Aww! Harry running around and half-tripping in wizarding robes for the first time is an adorable image!

    I love his blunt-ness with McGonagall, and also her gentle understanding. In cannon, and often in fandom, we see a McGonagall who is far less attentive than she out to be. So I like that good ol' Minnie is really stepping up to the plate in this fic.

    Unrelated: Sorry to nit-pick, but it should be "Muggle-born," not Muggle, for Hermione in the third paragraph. (I know you know that, and it's just a typo, but I figured I should point it out.)

    Nice work. I'm excited to read the rest!

Title: Meeting Professor Snape 13 Apr 2012 11:30 am
Reviewer: Foreverhope (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Also, I love what you've done with his associations to the color green. I had an "aha!" moment as I put those pieces together. Nicely done!
Title: Meeting Professor Snape 13 Apr 2012 11:30 am
Reviewer: Foreverhope (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this. Completely. I love getting to see inside Harry's head and understand where he's coming from. I also love our new-found, protective, bear-hug Snape. It makes sense that this Harry would feel most comfortable with Snape, since he is the most consistent, orderly, and disciplined character that we meet in cannon (besides McGonagall, perhaps.)

    I'm amazed and impressed that Harry is coping as well as he is. Hogwarts would be incredibly overwhelming to any new, Muggle-raised student, but he has so many extra challenges. And he's handling it so well!

    I do want him to go live with Severus though. I wonder how the dorms will be for him?

Title: Sorting 13 Apr 2012 11:23 am
Reviewer: Foreverhope (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ooh I love seeing a Severus who fully fulfills his promise to Dumbledore; I love it when he pledges to watch over Harry's well being instead of just his physical safety.

    I love the calm and gentle tone he takes with Harry, and the way he talks him through each step. That's exactly what Harry needed!

    This is really interesting so far! I've never read an Austistic Harry before. I hope this isn't a rude question, but is someone close to you on the spectrum? I have a good friend who is an Aspie, and he is one of the most beautiful people on the planet, in my opinion.

    Anyhow, I really appreciate the perspective you're taking so far with this story!

Title: Chapter 11 13 Apr 2012 9:26 am
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    This was awesome...and I hate writers block as well, so I hope that gets sorted out.

    I loved the chapter if I didnt say that already.

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