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Reviews For Lost and Found
Just a very minor point, there were a few spelling/grammar issues (you're/your, for instance), but those are easily fixed, and didn't detract much from the story. I'd love to read a sequel to this!
Then again this review shouldnt count I'm biased lol
“Why are you outside this time of night child?” “Aren’t your parents going to be worried about you?” would just be “Why are you outside this time of night, child? Aren’t your parents going to be worried about you?” And the your in the second-to-last line should be you're - it's short for You Are. Once again, it's a really nice story, just fixing those small things makes it flow a lot better =) Author's Response: Cool thanks those are all fixed up and thanks for reading |
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