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Title: We Recieve... What We Least Expect From Those We Least Expect It From 08 May 2021 6:08 pm
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    Sucks that everybody seems to be making decisions about harry's cancer and nobody is asking him whatsoever. For all intents and purposes, harry is independent as heck; kid takes care of himself more than any of these adults have ever taken care of him. Now with something like cancer, that he could be dying from, he can't even just take that in. Dumbledores already making plans and snape's still being an arse and even malfoys got stuff going on and harry's trying to confort him and the mediwitch is acting like he doesn't need to understand when it's his own body that's been messed with.
Title: We Recieve... What We Least Expect From Those We Least Expect It From 28 Jul 2012 4:19 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Will Petunia and Snape quarrel at some point? Nice shouting match, please?
Title: We Recieve... What We Least Expect From Those We Least Expect It From 29 Dec 2011 4:08 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Just wanted to say, I love this story.

    You portray all the characters so well and I can feel empathy for each of them, which is the mark of a good writing. Onto the next chappie...
Title: We Recieve... What We Least Expect From Those We Least Expect It From 29 Dec 2011 4:08 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Just wanted to say, I love this story.

    You portray all the characters so well and I can feel empathy for each of them, which is the mark of a good writing. Onto the next chappie...

    Author's Response: Yay! Thanks so much!
Title: We Recieve... What We Least Expect From Those We Least Expect It From 02 Nov 2011 12:43 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for updating. I love harry's thoughts they are so harry! Also he nd Severus are quite IC which is refreshing thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad they're in character! I spend a lot of time making sure everyone behaves as they should, even though this story is AU. Thanks again!
Title: We Recieve... What We Least Expect From Those We Least Expect It From 31 Oct 2011 5:51 am
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    More please!

    I really like how you've developed this story so far. Others have addressed the concept of Harry having cancer in their fics but they were mostly hurt/comfort tales, and didn't seem to have much of a plot outside of the cancer experience. I do like that you are addressing Draco's situation. When he ran in begging for Severus to take the Dark Mark off, I almost cried.

    I really like how you are showing the change in perspective and the way that Petunia is trying to make up for how badly her family treated Harry for all those years. The fitful starts and stops, and hesitancy makes sense. Yes, the Dementor attack on Dudley would be a good catalyst for a change of heart. And I wanted to cry again when Harry woke up to find Petunia asleep beside him. How sad to be 16 years old and only then have the comfort that every sick child should have from their parental figure.

    I am really looking forward to seeing what happens next with both Harry and Draco, and I really hope to see Petunia and Dudley stand up to Vernon for real eventually. You've done a great job so far, and I'm sure that future chapters will be just as good, if not better, than all that have gone before.

    Well done!

    Author's Response: Your review really, really made my day. I mean, this is what I really love to see in a review. It shows me that my reasoning isn't completely nonsensical. I spent oads of time considering how to make something this AU as realistic as possible. You know, so it doesn't seem like I'm just using the timeline to slap the story in there. There had to be a reason for Petunia and Dudley and Snape to change. Motivation and all that. I think, a lot of times, we forget that the characters in these stories are people too. And peope don't just change out of no where. Whew! I could spend all day talking about this stuff! But I won't bore you. Thank you so much for the review, I really, really appreciate it!
Title: We Recieve... What We Least Expect From Those We Least Expect It From 27 Oct 2011 11:49 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    You're moving this story along nicely. I really like your take on Petunia and while I am not much of a Draco fan he's tolerable so far.
    Congratulations on your other writing too!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really happy you like it! Draco ws a pain in the rear, but hey, everyone deserves a second chance, right? Harry even gave one to Voldemort: ) Hope you like the next one as well!
Title: We Recieve... What We Least Expect From Those We Least Expect It From 26 Oct 2011 5:44 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter! Pet sure has come a long way. Harry so needs her right now.

    Author's Response: Thank you!

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