| Title: Potter, Snape, and Malfoy
| 08 May 2021 7:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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I can't even be mad at Snape and dumbledore actions cause harry himself doesn't even care that he has cancer. Well he cares but he wants to live in Denial land and won't even ask questions to clarify anything so why would anybody treat it like it's that serious.
great story!! Look forward to the next update.
I wonder how long Draco will manage to cope. He is pretty unstable
| Title: Potter, Snape, and Malfoy
| 29 Dec 2011 4:31 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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I feel so bad for Harry AND Draco. So much to deal with, and Snape is turning out to be not a bad guardian to Harry.
As usual Marie...wonderful writing. I can't stop reading this, and I don't want to get to the end and have to wait for another chapter!! You have me hooked.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you!
I'm glad you liked it! And I'm happy you're hooked!
Cool story!!!! Look forward to the next update. I hope that they really do come to an understanding of each other soon sounds like they will need it.
Author's Response: Thanks! And don't worry, I've got it all figured out!
| Title: Potter, Snape, and Malfoy
| 29 Nov 2011 12:54 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Gret how they are interacting still very much in character but with glimpses of something more thank you
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you think so!
| Title: Potter, Snape, and Malfoy
| 24 Nov 2011 12:04 am
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Good long chapter, well worth the wait. I particularly like how the three of them seem to be getting along quite well without you needing to make any drastic character changes.
Author's Response: Oh good, I'm glad you don't mind the wait too much. I am trying to get them out faster. But I think quality and believability takes quite a bit of time.
Thanks for the review!
| Title: Potter, Snape, and Malfoy
| 23 Nov 2011 11:02 pm
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| Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed)
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Another great chapter!
I did notice one inconsistency you may want to fix, however: early in the chapter, the port's on the right side of his chest, but later you have him roll onto his left side 'where the port was'
Author's Response: Yikes, it's supposed to be on the right... whoops. Thanks! I'll fix it!
pretty good. I enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thanks Aut!
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