| Title: Snape's Expectations, and an Appointment II
| 07 Jan 2013 11:29 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Poor Petunia, completely out of her comfort zone. You really gave the doctor a distinctive personality, not quite sure how much confidence he'll have given Harry though!
Author's Response: The doctor will play or role in the coming chapters! Petunia is trying her hardest to be there for Harry and deny her instincts to hate magic. Thanks for the review!
| Title: Snape's Expectations, and an Appointment I
| 07 Jan 2013 11:22 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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I'm glad that Malfoy seems to have a proper role to play in your story, and hasn't been added just for the sake of it; also that Snape is remaining suitably Snape-ish, although with those two boys I suppose anyone would.
Author's Response: Thank you! Malfoy's importance will only grow as time goes on. Snape is currently struggling to find a medium. He can't hate Harry because Harry being sick on top of everything else bothers him, and Malfoy, while arrogant and stupid, is also alone in the world.
| Title: Snape's Expectations, and an Appointment II
| 07 Jan 2013 9:14 pm
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| Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed)
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Wow, that doctor is a bit overwhelming! Poor Harry!
Glad you got the chance to update! :-)
Author's Response: The doctor is more than he seems. ;)
Thanks for the review!
This was awesome and I hope you are having fun but I want to know what happens next. I can't wait.
| Title: Chapter 13
| 29 Jul 2012 10:01 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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How wonderful enjoy your holiday! Great chapter but please don't leave us in suspense for long!
| Title: Discretion Amongst Snakes
| 29 Jul 2012 9:25 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Fantastic contrasting emotions shown in this chapter thank you
I like this story. Magical world is so medieval in its disrespect to patient's rights! I mean, Draco ogling Harry while he is being treated? It is Canon-like, don't think I criticise it
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