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Title: Potter, Snape, and Malfoy 23 Nov 2011 11:02 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter!
    I did notice one inconsistency you may want to fix, however: early in the chapter, the port's on the right side of his chest, but later you have him roll onto his left side 'where the port was'

    Author's Response: Yikes, it's supposed to be on the right... whoops. Thanks! I'll fix it!
Title: Potter, Snape, and Malfoy 22 Nov 2011 7:57 pm
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    pretty good. I enjoyed it.

    Author's Response: Thanks Aut!
Title: We Recieve... What We Least Expect From Those We Least Expect It From 02 Nov 2011 12:43 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for updating. I love harry's thoughts they are so harry! Also he nd Severus are quite IC which is refreshing thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad they're in character! I spend a lot of time making sure everyone behaves as they should, even though this story is AU. Thanks again!
Title: We Recieve... What We Least Expect From Those We Least Expect It From 31 Oct 2011 5:51 am
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    More please!

    I really like how you've developed this story so far. Others have addressed the concept of Harry having cancer in their fics but they were mostly hurt/comfort tales, and didn't seem to have much of a plot outside of the cancer experience. I do like that you are addressing Draco's situation. When he ran in begging for Severus to take the Dark Mark off, I almost cried.

    I really like how you are showing the change in perspective and the way that Petunia is trying to make up for how badly her family treated Harry for all those years. The fitful starts and stops, and hesitancy makes sense. Yes, the Dementor attack on Dudley would be a good catalyst for a change of heart. And I wanted to cry again when Harry woke up to find Petunia asleep beside him. How sad to be 16 years old and only then have the comfort that every sick child should have from their parental figure.

    I am really looking forward to seeing what happens next with both Harry and Draco, and I really hope to see Petunia and Dudley stand up to Vernon for real eventually. You've done a great job so far, and I'm sure that future chapters will be just as good, if not better, than all that have gone before.

    Well done!

    Author's Response: Your review really, really made my day. I mean, this is what I really love to see in a review. It shows me that my reasoning isn't completely nonsensical. I spent oads of time considering how to make something this AU as realistic as possible. You know, so it doesn't seem like I'm just using the timeline to slap the story in there. There had to be a reason for Petunia and Dudley and Snape to change. Motivation and all that. I think, a lot of times, we forget that the characters in these stories are people too. And peope don't just change out of no where. Whew! I could spend all day talking about this stuff! But I won't bore you. Thank you so much for the review, I really, really appreciate it!
Title: We Recieve... What We Least Expect From Those We Least Expect It From 27 Oct 2011 11:49 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    You're moving this story along nicely. I really like your take on Petunia and while I am not much of a Draco fan he's tolerable so far.
    Congratulations on your other writing too!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really happy you like it! Draco ws a pain in the rear, but hey, everyone deserves a second chance, right? Harry even gave one to Voldemort: ) Hope you like the next one as well!
Title: Mothers and Sons II 26 Oct 2011 8:38 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, Harry in the snake pit. This should be very interesting.

    Enjoying this story very much.

    Author's Response: I hope so! Thank you!
Title: We Recieve... What We Least Expect From Those We Least Expect It From 26 Oct 2011 5:44 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter! Pet sure has come a long way. Harry so needs her right now.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Too Much, Too Soon 26 Oct 2011 7:16 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. omg!

    I'm actaully glad that Petunia is finally going to take some respoinsibility for her nephew.

    Good chappie.

    Author's Response: Lol, so am I! I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the review!
Title: Of Possible Breakthroughs and Unsettling News 26 Oct 2011 6:41 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, this is so sweet. I love that Petunia has had a change of heart. Good job.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the review!
Title: Attempted Explanations and Hurried Assumptions 26 Oct 2011 6:20 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Harry. How sad.


    I hope that they can treat his Hodgkins and he gets cured or goes into remission.

    Good job.

    Author's Response: Aw, I know! Thank you!

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