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Reviews For Just For Now
I did notice one inconsistency you may want to fix, however: early in the chapter, the port's on the right side of his chest, but later you have him roll onto his left side 'where the port was' Author's Response: Yikes, it's supposed to be on the right... whoops. Thanks! I'll fix it!
Author's Response: Thanks Aut!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad they're in character! I spend a lot of time making sure everyone behaves as they should, even though this story is AU. Thanks again!
I really like how you've developed this story so far. Others have addressed the concept of Harry having cancer in their fics but they were mostly hurt/comfort tales, and didn't seem to have much of a plot outside of the cancer experience. I do like that you are addressing Draco's situation. When he ran in begging for Severus to take the Dark Mark off, I almost cried. I really like how you are showing the change in perspective and the way that Petunia is trying to make up for how badly her family treated Harry for all those years. The fitful starts and stops, and hesitancy makes sense. Yes, the Dementor attack on Dudley would be a good catalyst for a change of heart. And I wanted to cry again when Harry woke up to find Petunia asleep beside him. How sad to be 16 years old and only then have the comfort that every sick child should have from their parental figure. I am really looking forward to seeing what happens next with both Harry and Draco, and I really hope to see Petunia and Dudley stand up to Vernon for real eventually. You've done a great job so far, and I'm sure that future chapters will be just as good, if not better, than all that have gone before. Well done! Author's Response: Your review really, really made my day. I mean, this is what I really love to see in a review. It shows me that my reasoning isn't completely nonsensical. I spent oads of time considering how to make something this AU as realistic as possible. You know, so it doesn't seem like I'm just using the timeline to slap the story in there. There had to be a reason for Petunia and Dudley and Snape to change. Motivation and all that. I think, a lot of times, we forget that the characters in these stories are people too. And peope don't just change out of no where. Whew! I could spend all day talking about this stuff! But I won't bore you. Thank you so much for the review, I really, really appreciate it!
Congratulations on your other writing too! Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really happy you like it! Draco ws a pain in the rear, but hey, everyone deserves a second chance, right? Harry even gave one to Voldemort: ) Hope you like the next one as well!
Enjoying this story very much. Author's Response: I hope so! Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you!
I'm actaully glad that Petunia is finally going to take some respoinsibility for her nephew. Good chappie. Author's Response: Lol, so am I! I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the review!
I hope that they can treat his Hodgkins and he gets cured or goes into remission. Good job. Author's Response: Aw, I know! Thank you! |
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